qaralynn

heey nice write!! I really like the imagery.. It's not really clear what's really seperating you though but other than that great write

hahaha nice write!! and that while your having writers block!!

aahh I really like this!! great write..

this is really great! I absolutely love it

hahahaha lol XD nice work!!

beautiful poem! It's really sweet.. I don't have any criticism

I like it! that's pretty much all I've got to say...XD

hey, it's a nice write but it would be indeed easier to read if you write it in lined formation.. like it though!

I absolutely love this! great imagery and well I don't have any critism XD great write!

hey, nice write It's interesting and left me wanting for more

good write but makes me kinda depressed :) But I guess that's why it's really good.. like it!

A really good write..The emotions really came through It's something we can all relate to at times... like it!

nice poem, I like it!

I actually liked the sentence: 'I saw a curious thing to me' XD It sounds kinda poetic or something :) nice write, I really enjoyed it!

hahah lovely poem XD It made me laugh.. good work, I like it