puppykiss

It was pretty short, but that is okay. I see you have passion for this poem. That is why you wrote it, correct? Well, I'll tell you this much- I've ...

The same things happen to me when I open up my book. Like I'm Bella. I wish I was Bella. *Sighs*. Anyway, I liked the poem. You explained everything so ...

I liked it. It's was very romantic. At first. Then, it got personal. Knda got gross. I mean nobody puts that stuff in books. Nasty. Her is a way you ...

Dear, I absolutely loved it. But I have a few things I recommend. First, you need to capitalize 'I' and at the beginning of a sentence. Secondly, you need to ...

Jesus Christ! My god, that is sad. I almost started crying. Your good at emotion in your poems. And I'm glade that this poem wasn't real. You have a way ...

It was very emotional. I love it. But I would make it a little longer. Sure, it is short, but I thought it was wonderful. I know this is a ...

I thought is was great. Honestly, you and I both know that most people are great poets. Well, Dear, there are a few things I'd like to suggest and correct. ...

I'm a huge fan of classical music. It's so peaceful. So graceful. Just like this poem of yours. I loved it. It was getting right to the point. I like ...

I don't know what to say. I loved it. In my perspective, you had no errors. Where did you learn such a way with words? I'm so not that good. ...

Well,I don't know where to start. I liked it. It was wonderful, Dear. But you need to add a little more punctuation. I notice a few times, you didn't capitalize ...