pudin.junidf

Hey Kat!! Oh my God! this was hilarious. lol x3 :lol: :lol: :lol: OK **caughs** now let's get serious. This is great, kat. I loved how you made an old ...

HI fox! This is so...cute! sorry for such teenage girliness, but it was. THey piece was better written thatn the last one and its intriguing and mysterious. It had very ...

HI Jess!! This is good, really good. A well written piece, why didn't you tell me about it. Well, let's get to the point. To be honest this had much ...

Hi Jess!! Pudin, as always, is here. I really like your story but this part seemed to move too fast, as if rushing. I think you had the same problem ...

Hi Prettycrazy!! Pudin here as requested. YOu'll have to excuse for this but I'm not a big fan of dragon stories, but don't worry I'll review it and try to ...

HI Crocks!! I loved it. It's really good. Now I have to say that it is interesting taht now you wrote from both of the characters P.O.S's which makes the ...

Hi!! Nice story. I liked it. The description of the first par, meaning before the evening part is really good. How she sees the blood running and how it seems ...

Hey Pinkangel!! Instant reply!! I have to say this was brilliant. This was a nice rpolowgue, that if other books had prologues like this one, i would definetely buy them. ...

Tuck Everlasting by Natalie Babbit Twilight Series by Stephenie Meyer The Secret Garden by Frances Hodgson Burnett The Diary of Anne Frank Sarah's Key by Tatiana de Rosnay Little Women ...

Beautiful!! Is inspiring I love to hear about fellow believers experiences. It's beautiful, it's your opinion its 's what you believe in, and what many of us believe in, but ...

This was beautiful fox, how you put her feelings and his feelings, the confusion and I also thought it was interesting the first paragraph. The description you made about hte ...

This...was wicked cool, empress!! I'm loving your story. YOu have such incredible descriptions and Mimi's character is awesome; the imagery you created was outstanding you really get the reader inside

HI!! Pudin Here!!! I'll be honest, this seemed more for lyrics than for poem. It's good though, I liked it though in a way. Some nitpicks. Is it possible, for ...

Hey Kat!! this is so beautiful, I love your rhyme and how the poem flows so easily. This is so good, I'm so proud of being your student. I don't ...

Hi!! I liked the poem, very short but very romantic, the kind of poem that if someone sends it to me, will definitely melt me like butter. Kiss me softly. ...