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Re: Pre-face - no name - story 2.
I never thought i would sink this low The I need to be capitalized I knew I was never going to stop once i started. I need to be capitalized. ...
Mon Oct 27, 2008 11:06 pm -
Re: My letter
Ohhhhh, I really like this! I really like this! It's so real! I want to read more! I love how the MC is...is...I don't what to call it, but I ...
Wed Oct 22, 2008 10:54 pm -
Re: Poison Love - Chapter 6
OMG! Love this chapter! I can't wait till chapter 7! Ohh, a past love story with Ethan and Elizabeth orrrr they use to be best friends??? I NEED TO KNOW! ...
Wed Oct 22, 2008 12:03 am -
Re: Midnight Blue; Five
I love this story! It's amazing! I love it! Veronica's part was very descriptive, but short. I still like it either way! Veronica is growing on me. Will's part was ...
Sun Oct 19, 2008 8:34 pm -
Re: New Life: Chapter 1 (Revised!)
Okay, I really like this! I want to know what happens next chapter! I wanna know why the dad is so...disgusting, what happened between the mom and dad, why she ...
Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:02 pm -
Re: Untouched ch 23
OMG LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I so called what happened next! XD! I can see into the future! haha! I can't wait to read the next chapter! HURRY! Two more chaptersto ...
Mon Oct 13, 2008 7:26 pm -
Re: Untouched ch 22
Holy Moly Jazz! I love this chapter! It also makes me so sad because it seems like Kasper isn't in the picture anymore and she doesn't care. Does Genna say ...
Sun Oct 12, 2008 10:09 pm -
Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {1}
I don't know how long I've been gone but it feels like eternity. Comma after but. There is a few other grammical mistakes so, you might want to re-read your ...
Fri Oct 10, 2008 10:51 pm -
Re: Eve-Prologue
OH MY GOD! This si so good! I love this is starts off really good too, so it make the reader want to read more! Like me! Haha. Anyway, I ...
Thu Oct 09, 2008 4:52 pm -
Re: the journal
One “Jaden” a voice called “Jaden Kaylana, where are you?” it was a man calling to me. Here you are missing a comma after the first Jaden. I wanted to ...
Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:12 pm -
Re: Midnight Blue; Three
Swallowing hard, I stuck my arms through the sleeves, coming back reality. there should be a to between back and reality. Okay, I really liked this and i was righr ...
Wed Oct 08, 2008 8:02 pm -
Re: Midnight Blue; Two
Oh, wow, I really like this. Whenever i read something good i get all giddy and can't take my eyes aways from it and want more, thats how I feel ...
Wed Oct 08, 2008 7:41 pm -
Re: Get over it my friend ch 6
review: Draive has been kicked out by her dad and she ran into Chris some how and she fell asleep in his bed. Then she got up and left a ...
Wed Oct 08, 2008 12:17 am -
Re: Kept In
Okay, this is reallly good! I really liked it and it pulled me in. What i think is that you should change this up a bit and make expand on ...
Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:41 pm -
Re: Suicidal heroes 1 Prologue
Hey I really like this! It's sounds really good so far! Well, I don't really like to review but, I will anyway. The only thing that I don't like is ...
Mon Sep 29, 2008 11:54 pm
