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Re: Pre-face - no name - story 2.
I never thought i would sink this low The I need to be capitalized I knew I was never going to stop once i started. I need to be capitalized. ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: My letter
Ohhhhh, I really like this! I really like this! It's so real! I want to read more! I love how the MC is...is...I don't what to call it, but I ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Poison Love - Chapter 6
OMG! Love this chapter! I can't wait till chapter 7! Ohh, a past love story with Ethan and Elizabeth orrrr they use to be best friends??? I NEED TO KNOW! ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Five
I love this story! It's amazing! I love it! Veronica's part was very descriptive, but short. I still like it either way! Veronica is growing on me. Will's part was ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: New Life: Chapter 1 (Revised!)
Okay, I really like this! I want to know what happens next chapter! I wanna know why the dad is so...disgusting, what happened between the mom and dad, why she ...
Oct 14, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 23
OMG LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I so called what happened next! XD! I can see into the future! haha! I can't wait to read the next chapter! HURRY! Two more chaptersto ...
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 22
Holy Moly Jazz! I love this chapter! It also makes me so sad because it seems like Kasper isn't in the picture anymore and she doesn't care. Does Genna say ...
Oct 12, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of the Unfaithful {1}
I don't know how long I've been gone but it feels like eternity. Comma after but. There is a few other grammical mistakes so, you might want to re-read your ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Eve-Prologue
OH MY GOD! This si so good! I love this is starts off really good too, so it make the reader want to read more! Like me! Haha. Anyway, I ...
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: the journal
One “Jaden” a voice called “Jaden Kaylana, where are you?” it was a man calling to me. Here you are missing a comma after the first Jaden. I wanted to ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Three
Swallowing hard, I stuck my arms through the sleeves, coming back reality. there should be a to between back and reality. Okay, I really liked this and i was righr ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Two
Oh, wow, I really like this. Whenever i read something good i get all giddy and can't take my eyes aways from it and want more, thats how I feel ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Get over it my friend ch 6
review: Draive has been kicked out by her dad and she ran into Chris some how and she fell asleep in his bed. Then she got up and left a ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Kept In
Okay, this is reallly good! I really liked it and it pulled me in. What i think is that you should change this up a bit and make expand on ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Suicidal heroes 1 Prologue
Hey I really like this! It's sounds really good so far! Well, I don't really like to review but, I will anyway. The only thing that I don't like is ...
Sep 29, 2008
