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Re: Watching
"Smiles, smiles, and more smiles stitched across their faces." First off I love this line. It seems so haunting because smiles are supposed to be a good thing, though they ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: The life and Death of a Pet Flea.
hahahahahahahahahahah *regains self* hilarious read! A must-read for some entertainment and wonderfully thrilling story of a girl who's best friend is that of a flea. I have five cats, and ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: Some Words
I've really got to go do dishes or whatnot because I've spent the last 45 minutes here reading & reviewing your work. The one you posted about a dog surprised ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: The Way
As @TheSybarite mentioned in the review below, this is short & simple, but nevertheless deep and meaningful. I fear to articulate that I may be repetitive, so forgive me Steward. ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: A Sanctified Heart
Fellow Baptist Christian here! Thank you for posting this! I'm glad you dared to bring up religion in this piece, because usually people tend to stray away from that. If ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: Sophie
As a teenage girl who struggles with Bipolar Disorder, self harm, major depression, suicidal thoughts (and a few more unfortunately) this is beautiful. Inspiring. I couldn't stop. I re-read it. ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: not ready for a title sorry
Welcome to YWS Druhi! I noticed your parents came from India (on your wall, hehe I like hearing about other writer's lives) so that certainly is an interesting thing! I ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: A Broken Heart
Holy doritos. Holy, holy doritos. Déjà vu decided to kick my rear IMMEDIATELY when I read this. I....I relate to this so much! Like, seriously, I could be saying these ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: Waiting
"So tell me are you hearing this? And tell me are you feeling this?" Golden. I just love these two lines, that could be breathlessly whispered against the wind as ...
Jul 10, 2016
