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Re: Serial Killer
I must say that i really enjoyed reading this story. It definatly hand an attention grabber, and the plot was there as well. i didnt notice any grammer mistakes which ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: The Photo Album
Hello, now when i first looked through this the description caught my eye. you have alot in there that is just very rendom and has nothing to do with your ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: The Last Kick
I do think that this was very short, but short dosnt always mean it's bad. After reading this poem a few times over i still dont understand what it's truley ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: I couldn't think of a title for it.
I really enjoyed reading this poem, it has very good flow and emotion. as for a name theres multiple things that it could be. My True Love The Way I ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Don't Go
Ok right off the bat, i was hooked by this story. The true emotion that i saw in this writing was amazing, i absolutly loved it. Also good use of ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Reassurance (Comments, please?)
Hey, i have to say that i really like this poem. You have some very great imagination put into this, and i for one appreciate that. The flow is easy ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: temporary title=the elementals
Ok first of all i love how the begining started in a dream. It totaly caught my attention, and it kept me wanting more. Secondly i found that you had ...
Aug 3, 2010
