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omg. this IS the chapter 8. lol. mistyped. thanks for pointing that out. x

wow. lovely review. thank you.

thank you for your thoughts. x

i'll check that little bit out. thanks so much for the review.

wow. such a helpful review. thanks so much. porcey x

thank you very much for the review, Lylas. will fix those parts. porcey x

well, the common response of people who are used to written poetry on the first time they read something meant to be performed is that it is story-ish; so i ...

well, the common response of people who are used to written poetry on the first time they read something meant to be performed is that it is story-ish; so i ...

i know the ending is cheesy. but somehow, i guess, i really am cheesy. lol. thanks so much for the review. porcey x

thank you for the review, brielle. i understand what you're trying to say.

Sure you told us that it happened, but where was the slow, melting metal? Where was the strange smell that filled the air as the robot melted? Humans have five ...

hi, thanks for nitpicking the tense changes i've overlooked "founds" was a typo. funny, because when i think about it, it doesn't seem to be. lol. the capitalization is intentional ...

oh, wait. it IS a prologue. gosh. haha. sorry. my bad.

very helpful. thank you.

thank you very much.