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Hai. Awesome to see a fellow avatard among the masses:D It's also good that you mention in the very beginning that the concept is heavily reliant on the Avatar storyline. ...

Alright, I see. Thanks! :)

Thanks for the thoughtful review!:) What do you mean in the very last line when you say the group was involved? Do you mean that the storyline is slowly binding ...

Thanks a lot for your review, and you are right - English is not my first language. But I now see where I'm going wrong, so thanks for that!)

Whooooaa! The review is almost as long as the chapter! :O But thank you, you gave me a lot of things to work on, I knew there was something... 'off' ...

Hahaha, okay, maybe I'd have to agree with that example. He definitely redeemed himself more than Vader... but, I can't close my eyes to how he treated Iroh, and don't ...

Hey again, thanks for the review! I've edited the things you told me to - Mr.Lurse is now mentioned, the name of the caller is too (you'll know who he ...

Hey Lycando, thanks for your positive comments;) I will improve on the description of the Temple - the two are indeed in the ruined part of town, because there they ...

Hey there;) Interesting stuff you have here. I kind of just sat back, thinking about what you've written. I consider myself a pretty solid LOTR fan, and Boromir was one ...

You're welcome! Glad to help;) Keep writing, and if you need anything reviewing, PM me or leave it in my thread for reviews:

It was interesting to write something from a point-of-view, and I guess it seems to work! So, thank you;)

Thank you:) I have edited it a bit more now, I hope this will improve it. Don't mind the apostrophe, my laptop doesn't want to make it a normal one ...

Wow, I've never seen something like this before. But it's pretty cool, even if it kind of made me feel insignificant and boring:D And, there are indeed, a lot of ...

Hey Nike, Thanks so much for the tip! That's really amusing, because when I write in Russian I have to use the dashed line, so I, for some reason subconsciously ...

Hello everybody:) It's so amazing to see how encouraging you guys are:D Kittengirl2, my intention was actually to show that we should live today, and that we should enjoy what ...