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Hellow:) Wow, really depressing stuff you have here. But hey, I can relate. I find at times that my father is not the idealised being I had in my childish ...

Hey! This was really abstract, nevertheless quite enjoyable indeed. The obsession that the first voice has for the mystery someone is really coming through in the writing, and that's always ...

Hey! It was interesting to read this. Don't worry about the category, it can remain in the 'general' just fine;) I guess I'll jump right into it! To begin. This ...

Hey there;) First off, I love the emotion that's put into this poem. I can literally feel it oozing through the lines, however there are a couple of spots where ...

Hey Firewood, I'm here to review (a little late, sorry about that) I guess I'll just jump right into it, and I will give you my general overview at the ...

Greetings. I have come to read some more! :D ~ Once again, some general points: in the beginning of the chapter, I was also learning new things. It's truly amazing ...

Hey there Twit, I'm here to review, as requested;) First of all - may I say that this was an absolute pleasure to read. I love how it's historically accurate, ...

Hi Klara, I'm here to review your piece today:) The title of your piece caught my eye, and the fact you talked about Edison made me stay. Many people have ...

Hey there;) First of all, very entertaining and unusual piece of writing here. Thankfully, I have avoided these kinds of terrors in school, but I still hated (still hate) maths, ...

Hey dreamwalker, long time no see;) First of all - love the choice of words, love the flow. Now, into some more detail: "and you’re crowded in a bar full ...

Hey ! Here, as requested. I guess I'll just get on with it. Firstly: “Sure, that’s what Jonnalla’s saying right now! But she’ll see, as if she doesn’t already know, ...

Hey:) I really liked this! Experiment successful, me thinks :P Some nitpicks: Evening had drifted by like honey. - I think the 'had' disrupts the flow a little bit. Might ...

Hey Blues ;) I'm here, faster than the speed of sound. I guess I'll jump right into it! I still remember it. It haunts me to this day. - great ...

Hey! Here as requested. I guess I'll jump right into it! The sky showed black clouds - I think that 'showed' isn't the best choice of words. Maybe, the sky ...

Hey there! Here to review, as requested. You asked to review 'something', and I stumbled upon this beautiful piece of writing. So, here are my nitpicks: He sat on the ...