polinkacreations

Hey there! Very intriguing start you've got here. I'm also writing something in first person, so I've come to "gain wisdom". (zing). So, good bits: ~ - I like the ...

Hai. Wow, this piece. It contains within it everything I value in a writer and all the qualities I wish I had:D Your language balances between the emotional side and ...

Well, hello there once again! Since not only am I a huge history fanatic, I am also a Russian - thus, your piece instantly grabbed my attention. So, two things ...

Hai there! You're my first review in months, my first "comeback" review - and reading this piece, I am instantly reminded why I still love this site and you all ...

Hey RylieJane! This was short, but insightful. Some improvements have to be made, I think. ~ First of all, I don't quite understand how your poem relates to fear and ...

Hey there! Polinka here;) You look like my saviour. I was literally just looking around to find how to make characters more 'rounded' and real. ~ Little grammar mistakes: - ...

Heey there! I was really excited to read some good horror today, and I was indeed satisfied. First off, the first sentence is simply amazing. I love the metaphors you ...

Hey there! Even though this is only 3 lines, it's wonderfully intriguing. I personally think you should continue this story - I mean, it might have been just an image ...

Hey there Blues! Glad to see another chapter up!:) What I really liked about this is the way you portrayed the angst and nervousness of the main character. It's sometimes ...

Hey there! I'll be your reviewer today. I guess I'll just jump right into it: - In the first sentence, Ginger "exclaims" - aren't they in class? Exclaiming implies something ...

Hey Blues, here I am! Firstly, the name is really catchy - connotations of both violence and beauty. Nice:P Little note: I apologise if I say the same thing as ...

Hey Riedawriter! This was a really deep and meaningful poem, and I'm not entirely sure I understand it completely, however that it not always a bad thing! I'll divide this ...

Hey Deadman;) This caught my attention, thus I will jump right into my comments. Firstly, the start plunges me straight into action. This would suit some, but I think it ...

The Border Review Hey Lycando, here I am to return the favour! Firstly, I absolutely loved it. Loved it, loved it, loved it. It kind of reminded me of the ...

Hey! I don't usually review religious writing because I think it's a slippery slope and things can go wrong very easily, but this poem really caught my attention. I really ...