piepiemann22

It's a nice piece. As for a title idea, not sure. Try to encorporate the fact eveyone has streanth and wants. Try it.

I love it. It speaks from the heart so well. Don't worry what other people say, your poetry is exelent!

I think it's a simple poem, but it was nice to write during the holidays.

I enjoied it. You wrote it well. you seemed to put a lot of thought into this piece. It was also nice the way you made it ryme. thats hard ...

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It has no point. It looks like you just threw it together. Next time put FEELINGS in your poems.

I see no meaning at all. Though they rarly do, but still, i see no point to it at all. Sorry

Pretty good for your first piece. I like the fact you made it ryme. The only problem is it doesn't have a meaning. No point, not even a sense of ...

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Amen brother, can't wait till this happens to me. From Ian, don't ask me?

I think it's good, but a few things could be better. Like when T.J tells Simon he knows he likes Emma he goes into a rage without much cause. Other ...

I seems to have the meaning of wanting to be free. Thats good. Give all af your pieces meaning if you can. As for a haiku I believe it's very ...

It's not bad for a first poem. Mine wasn't that good either. though I did like how you spoke of something with a meaning to yourself. Poetry is inspired by ...

I agree with others everything except one point. You writing comes from the heart like mine does, try reading some. In the end it doesn't matter what other people think ...

I don't agree with rosethorn. The last line is a perfect ending to it all. I also liked how you seemed to put your heart into the piece. thats what ...