phantomwriterjoe

Thanks Rainn!

btw: this girl also shows that she has the characteristics and personality if you will of spring time. That's why I believe the title is what it is ^_^

Hey Katie horse, I'm glad you were cracking up because it's supposed to be funny ;) Me and some friends were bored one night and we came up with this ...

No Problem :) Back atchya! ;)

hmm....new chapter's out ^_^

oh yay! I was right :D

I like the form in which you wrote this poem. I do have to disagree, however, with the meaning. I think that we are all loved; loved enough to be ...

Thanks so much for the awesome review! I fixed the formatting for this chapter and chapter 1. Is that more what it should look like?

Also, read on to chapter 2 and you'll get a better description of the mansion ;)

Thanks so much for the awesome review! I'll definitely take the points you made into consideration for when I rewrite it. One thing about the swear word, however; I did ...

Thanks for noticing! I went through and fixed those issues on a different edition of this chapter, but I haven't yet on here. I hope you enjoy chapter 3 just ...

Dear Kyllorac, Thank you so much for so much help! I just joined so I did not know that a copyright is put on automatically, and I didn't stop to ...

Glad that you liked it. I didn't write the symbol's like that lol They must have happened automatically when I copied and pasted it. Thanks for letting me know, I'll ...

Thanks so much for your in-depth review, cm57105! I'll be posting the next chapter soon so make sure you look for it :)

Thank you so much! The story is definitely dream-like and nostalgic. I hope you keep reading as the new chapters come out ^_^