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Okey dokey, listen up. The arguments of religious people being persecutors are certainly true. But if you can name one group of anyone who's anything significant in history that hasn't ...

haha okay

your passion awes and frightens me.

thanks!

ahhhh... the sandman. Clever

ummmm... yucky

"Then soon enough I saw a flick of color" It probably should be fleck or flicker. The hybrid doesn't work

Thank you for the review. I wrote this a while ago on a whim, and there's nothing else. I'm sorry, but I don't care enough about it to revise :)

1. you used the words "present tense" and "past-tense" in the same sentence. Methinks I see a discrepancy :) 2. *consistent 3. *i.e. 4. Nothing. Wow. Estoy impresado. Haha, if ...

hi. thank you for the review. This was a really powerful piece that I can't really bring myself to try and critique. My mom had cancer too, and it was ...

by child of forgotten time, I mean that it is bent and forced to obey the cruel whims of time. By a monolith - it's really a tribute to ages ...

thanks! except I couldn't understand what you were saying...

thank you

Thanks! This was originally on Microsoft Word, I just put it here for some peer review. Pretty much all formatting was lost :)

Never mind, I guess I had paragraphs. All of that formatting was lost in the transfer :)