penguinduan1

I haven't read Twilight due to constant comments from my friends. They say it's gross and pointless... But uh, LOVE THE ENDING! Goodbye, Bella!

Descriptive and it's a great story. Keep on writing. I like it how you don't really say that he is gone, but instead, you end with "RIP". Very nice!

Nice story... I have realized, you like blood and murder... But, very detailed and descriptive, and it's, well, great! Keep on going!

A sweet poem. I liked the last lines, but, again, they seemed a little out of place. Keep writing!

What a touching story. It makes me get all thankful for what I have now. I hope your mom finds a way to stop her addiction. :D

Hey! You know me! Yah, i ain't gonna say my name. but anyways, great job. spelling errors, but nothing else. hey, get back from your trip soon!

it was pretty good but not a very eye-catching story. i may be wrong and you might have the most epic story ever, but this intro was a little short ...

it's really interesting and the plot is interesting. i think it has a few grammatical errors, but otherwise, it's really good!

im dying of boredom! JUST PLZ! BE HARSH!

advice advice advice. COME ON!

awesome writing! great job

really good! keep on going! it actually got my attention, if you don't know and probably you don't, I usually am not caught by any good stories lately.

It was really interesting. I am so gonna read the next chapter! Good plot!

PLEASE GIVE ME ADVICE! I NOW HAVE CHAPTER 1 READY!

Loved the story! great way to mix it up! i enjoyed reading and want to know who romeo's other love is!