penguinduan1

Thank you for the feedback! I have edited all I could, and I plan to write more... Your reviews really do mean a lot to me.

I regret telling you that I did not read through the whole story. It's midnight where I am and I'm dead tired. I just wanted to say that this seriously ...

...pick you up at 3 o' clock tonight. 3 o' clock as in 3 in the morning (3 A.M.) or 3 P.M. (in the afternoon)? I got a bit confused ...

it's been more than a year since i've been on yws and I come back to a wonderfully developed and very, uh, good (?) story. please please please continue!

The first thing I saw when I saw the title was 'asian'... Heh heh... I'm creepy. I know, this post is pointless, but I just wanted to say that.

Thumbs up for monsters in you closet!

'How have it been?' The 'have' should be 'has'.... Just a minor comment, other than that, good job!

People say that this book is really bad. So uh, I haven't read it. But, I have a question. HOW OLD ARE THEY? Ok, I am good! :P

I liked this story! I can sort of relate to this. I push to remember little details but what I think I do remember, usually I think isn't exactly right. ...

I really liked the story. It was truly beautiful. Keep on writing! (Sorry, I guess I don't have much to say!)

I love the original song and this, this wonderful story really captures the song, I guess. I loved it!

Interesting story line! Hmm... A child under 7 saying "damn"... is that normal? PS I am opposed to cussing, so, I guess I just cussed... DARN ME!

Pretty good, kinda pointless, but then again, it's supposed to be BORING! So, boring it is...

Thanks! I will be sure to improve it!

Thanks to all of you... But, I have edited this chapter and have reposted it as a novel, CHECK IT OUT! To make things clear, I will not edit this, ...