pencilgirl

yeah i was listening to it and i typed it in :P and i was like opps and then it kind of fit so i was like well red jumpsuit ...

thank you and i smiled at you'r reply i thought my poem would never be commented flawless. i'm happy you did =)

well done on the rhymes. Edited for character spamming, check your PM's. -Grif

'a world' 'centuary' 'on new dreams to aspire' were all typing errors which i have now corrected. repetition of 'no one' creates the rhythm in the line so i wouldn't ...

wait you are a new member...welcome!

well it took me a while to read it but it was worth it good job! your vocabulary and tenses are good but you need to lower it on uneccesary ...

your work is very well written but you can improve a bit of vocabulary

sure i am in no hurry

not bad. though permanent immaturity isn't really a problem. i hate being a teen ...but then i love it

i know how bad it is ducky i wanted you to check out the 4 elements story

thank you for all the reviews and tough critisizm

thank you so much and yes "the corpse bride" was my inspiration but i swear the rest was my idea

thank you i for acknowledging my work

no not really i just like superpowers