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Hey Gabe, welcome to YWS I'm Peanut. I thought this was very good for one of your first jobs. It was very short though. I thought they were in a ...

Hey Kaylan, I thought this was very good, but is this happening before the other post because the title says part two. Anyway I only saw one other thing that ...

Okay, that was pretty creepy. You started off with the killer guy umm... well killing people. I didn't know anything about him, except for the little bit you put in ...

Hey Bailey, its Sarah. Ummmm... . just thought I'd tell you there is sort of a rule. The rule is that you are supposed to post two reviews before posting ...

Hey Cheshire Cat. I really like this story it is very well written. Your narrator interests me, (s)he is very random. This was by far my favorite part: Few know ...

Hahahahaha! * laughs, sobs, laughs from sobbing* Great job Kaylan very funny! I thought it was very good. I didn't see any grammatical errors, but then again i was to ...

Hi Cheshire Cat. I thought this was very good. I love reading your work this story in particular. I didn't really find any grammar mistakes, but I was a little ...

Hey Abby. I thought this was good a few things though. 1. This seemed kinda old. What I mean is the whole Its-Not- You -It's-Me thing. Always the same. 2. ...

Hey Abby! I just have one question how much time have you been spending with Bailey, 'cuz y'all write about basically the same thing and yet you are both good ...

Hey cat its peanut! I finally found this one ( the one you didnt let me read at school!) It was good, I liked seeing a different side, since all ...

Hi i just saw the other posts and im sure your tired of this but im about to pick this story apart. :smt064 the bold is me. [quote]// The woman ...

that was good I haven't read Hamlet but have seen the movie (my dad's an English teacher). I thought that the way you wrote it even if some one read ...

Hey, I'm Peanut and I'll be your review person this evening. Sorry I know I'm bad at this so bare with me. The story was very good. At the end ...

Hey cat! you did a great job. As you know i have already read the things you have written,but i was just wondering: does this prologue go with the other ...

Hi, Ember. I really liked your story, but i have to disagree with cat. She said that she thought the werewolves were like the ones in Twilight. I think that ...