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Hi, Grandison, I'm Sarah. I haven't read the other chapters but I didn't really go into the story much, just the grammar and a few things about Evan. Nitpicks: But ...

Beckiwah! I don’t know if I’ve ever reviewed anything of yours….*thinks* Yeah nothing is popping into my head. Before I start, thank you for the torch= flashlight bit, that was ...

Hey, Stella(: I’m going to review this. I’m warning you now I didn’t read the first half, I just read the summary so I hope that’s okay. Nitpicks: Ten years ...

Eli! Sarah here to review your lovely poem(: Nitpicks: When I was small, you showed the stars -- showed me? You might want to clarify because it could be us ...

Hi, Rosey(: It's been too long since I've read any of your work. I hope this helps and I'm not just rambling. Nitpicks: Footsteps came from down the hall, slowly. ...

I’ve never reviewed lyrics but I’ve done poetry, so I guess that’s sorta the same? I’m going to try my best to help. There's just a few little things that's ...

Yay! Emily, details! Way to go(: I liked this much better than your other pieces (which I liked for different reasons). This one had feeling. I could feel the character, ...

Again this goes in the order of the text. I hope this helps. A low blood sugar--? What? I think you are missing a word. You are telling us about ...

I'm so nit-picky and I'm going to apologize for this before you even get any further. I wrote these down as I read it so they should go along with ...

Emily! Hiya(: I'm going to try to review this but the others seemed to have gotten most of it. One thing I notice (or didn't notice...I guess) was that there ...

Hey, JD. I'm gonna try to give you a review. I haven't reviewed in a while though. But here goes. your pea sized brain I'm not positive but I think ...

Stella! I'm here to help(: Although this is pretty good I don't know how much help I'll be. There are a few grammatical things but you're starting to make me ...

I'm sad that I didn't see anything wrong with this...I want to be able to help you but I didn't catch anything that was obvious, so good job with that. ...

I liked the fact that this makes me ask so many questions. Usually when writers do that you don't really want to know the answers because their approach is all ...

Hi, Meep(: When I read this I was very interested, having researched AS before. I think you did a great job of describing what it might be like for some ...