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This is really good. I have read another of your work and I must say that you did well on both of them! This is a really good way to ...

That was really confusing. Good, but confusing.

Wow. This was incredible! It was very simple, short, and to the point :) I loved it!!

I really enjoyed reading this. I didn't think it was cliche at all! :) Keep up the good work!

Not bad but I think you should make it deeper. I don't usually like poems that don't rhyme but this one isn't half bad :) Keep up the good work!

You should extend this and make it into a book!

This was really good! If it was a song on the radio, I would actually listen to it! You should put it on youtube. I would love to hear it! ...

There was lots of bleeding. LOL. It was really descriptive though and well written :)

Oops. That last message was supposed to say "...this randomly popped into my head so I..." Sorry about the typo :)

I agree. That was really confusing. I mean I get the death part but I didn't really feel like I could get any real emotion out of it. Like, I ...

This was something that I wrote in school and I just decided to post it up here. It's actually about me and my first ride on a roller coaster. I ...

Wow. That was beautiful. I really felt the emotion that you poured into that. Good job!

Hey Everyone! I feel like I wrote this a long time ago and I forgot about it for a while. A few days ago, I remembered it and decided to ...

Good :)

That was really beautiful. I really liked the part about the girl in the meadow. The use of vocabulary was really amazing! I really felt like I knew the character.