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Aw, thank you!

Aw, thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it. I'll keep your suggestions in mind when editing. You're the best! Thanks again!

Hey, thanks a lot! I have edited the story a lot more in my documents; I just haven't had the chance to carry over my revisions to YWS. Your suggestions ...

Hey! Thank you so much--I definitely needed this review. It makes me really happy that you were able to relate to the protagonist. I'll contemplate giving him a name, but ...

Thanks so much!

Thanks!

Of course I don't mind; take as long as you need ^^

Friendly reminder ;) (and thanks so much in advance)

Hey! That's actually really funny, because when I was editing the chapter document earlier, I totally took that part out (for the reasons that you suggested). :P Thanks for the ...

Hello again. You'll see that earlier in my review, I commented on how, if I had not read the description of your poem, then I wouldn't have known any of ...

Sorry if I (may have?) misinterpreted the message of the poem. And absolutely; I'm glad this might've been somewhat helpful. Good luck with school and stress etc., I'm feeling that ...

lol I was thinking of that song when I wrote that. wait, was the song your inspiration? pls tell me it was.

Okay, I see you've changed things up a bit. The rhyme pattern is much better, so that's commendable. But I stand by the rest of my review; this is still ...

Awh, thank you

Oh my God. Like,