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Thanks for the review!

Aw, you're so sweet! Haha this review made me laugh. (*follows back* ;))

Aw, you're so welcome! I'm so glad your taking my suggestions into account!

Anytime! Awesome poem.

Hi Holly, just wanted to mention that capitalization is actually a stylistic choice in poetry. The lack of capitalization was most likely intended to enhance the meaning of the poem. ...

Hey, thanks for the super helpful review! It outlines a lot of things I need to fix. I hardly edited it, so I guess it was bound to be full ...

Thanks for the suggestions, and sorry about the apparent cliche ending (I hate cliche stuff too, believe me :)) and I'll definitely work on editing the things you mentioned.

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No problem :D You're poem was wonderful.

Aw, no problem. Anytime. :)

Thanks so much! I haven't been on here in a while, so it was nice to see this comment when I logged in!

This definitely helped a lot! Sorry, unfortuneately I just haven't been on in a while. Thanks so much! :)

This definitely helped a lot! Sorry, unfortuneately I just haven't been on in a while. Thanks so much! :)

Wow, thanks! Also for the follow!

Hey Laure! Thank you so much for your helpful review! AH! I had it labeled as chapter one at first, but then I remembered how I did a relatively similar ...