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Totally do the whole series! That would be so awesome! I loved this and I love Twitter. It rules! But you should add some other people's posts. That would be ...

It's very well written and I cannot wait to read more about this character. The description is very good, and your character is very believeable. All in all, a very ...

Interesting, I love the flow of it and the tranquil picture it paints. It's quite beautiful. My only suggestion is to include the meaning of coqui because I hate looking ...

As Joyce said, you need to work on your punctuation as well as your capatilization. However, forget the technical things. This is an interesting plot. I like the fact that ...

This is an interesting scene and it's well written. I can't find any grammatical or spelling issues within this. The feelings are shown through this and I can imagine this ...

Interesting, that's how I feel when I do it...not that I do. Been clean for three months! Haha, this is great! It's engaging, pulling you in and at the end, ...

The imagery was quite capturing and I could imagine the sea which this person was stuck in. I could imagine the click of which you speak of. I love the ...

It's alright. It's not too captivating as say other ones, but I'm not a big fan of romantic poems. I liked the baseball references because I haven't seen that done ...

Heehee, I liked it. I see why you won. I like the flow you kept and I loved the description. Good job!

Now this is awesome. I love it, epecially that you used music for your poem. It's awesome that you got featured! Good job! I reccomend what the others said, but ...

I think that you should expand on this. Throw in more metaphors and meanings into this. I don't know what else to say. It didn't give me any depth. It ...

I love this. Just wanted to say. I didn't find anything wrong with it. All your grammar is correct as is spelling. It gets the message across very well.

That's very helpful. May I ask, do you have any references to go to in order to learn about that career? Could you give me some? Very informative article, by ...

Haha this is a fun peice. The mistakes were pointed out already. This made me giggle. I would love to show this to the couple's in my school.

It was a bit repetitive. I am assuming that a Night Shadow is like your angel but as a shadow. It gets the point across.