paintingtherain97

I really like this. It's got a nice rhythm, even though it's free verse. I like the imagery created in your descriptions of the shadows and everything you feel. When ...

Absolutely amazing.

I love this. I agree with the first reviewer in that it feels sleepy, in a good way. Don't change a thing.

I love it :)

Thanks for the reviews. I'll work on it. :)

I read the original of this and wondered about the ending, too. This is good. Keep it up! :)

Really good :)

LOL

This is great! Your rhyming was good, and the message was definitely clear. Keep it up.

Thanks and I didn't mean to offend anyone. I'm a wallflower myself.

She walked into the church, her ordinarily immaculate appearance careless and bedraggled. Her blond hair that was usually braided and clipped hung in a messy ponytail, and she was wearing ...

Holy crap! This is, like, professional-style writing that not a lot of young people can do. You were really vivid and creative in your desriptions, and the meaning seemed really ...

I like this a lot! Keep it up. Good rhyme scheme, maybe try to balance syllabic content. Keep writing.

Thanks :)

Thanks. And I love Degrassi! Are you talking about Riley?