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Hey Gema. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you felt the imagery in the poem, Imagery is one of my favourite poetic tools, and I do spend a lot of ...

Thanks for the review Moon, I'll work on the punctuation and definitely move it to the political section. I actually come from Nigeria, and trust me our government is worse, ...

This kidda sounds personal

Love your use of rhythm it gives the poem a melodic feel to it making me want to keep reading, your use of imagery also helps transfer the reader feel ...

"I will not beg my broken heart to heal" personally I think that statement right there is the summary of the whole poem. Only reading that sentence on it's own ...

"when even my own soul is no longer in love with me" This is one deep poem and that line up there is my favorite part in the whole poem ...

Thanks for the reviews guys I have to admit I too think I could have written more stanzas between the period of idleness and that of stirring agitation, maybe I'll ...

For a moment there I was transported into the world of little red, this is one poem that takes a child's storybook and shows all of us that the story ...

The poem opens up by putting an image of a person trying to come up with a piece of literary work but is first confused and sacred cause he is ...

I have to agree with ilitar you should try to create a theme you want to pass across to the reader