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That’s a touching poem. Relatable and moving. Great job. Only one note: I always look forward to weekends A break from the stresses of school But what is the point ...

Hey Margrite! I absolutley love this poem. You're so talented, girl! Glows: - This poem just makes the reader fee l. While reading it, I felt like all of my ...

That was some pure amusement. So funny, BlueCat. I have one note: The writer is part of the recipe, therefore I'd add "writer" to the ingredients. Here are the lines ...

Hey Ryleigha! That is so funny. Great job! A few things I'd like to point out: Glows: 1. The first line of the story is a great, welcoming opning. 2. ...

Hey Elinor! I'm back for this again. I'll jump right into it: Nicholas takes a deep breath. He doesn’t believe them, but knows better than to say anything. But Alexandra ...

Hey Elinor! Great script! just want to point out some notes. 1. I'll try not to repeat what others wrote, but about the format issue you had: In the following ...

That is so funny! I like how the devil and god get along and talk like two business-buddies, and I also like the way you use multiple synonyms! I have ...

This is an amazing piece of art. I just love it! Every detail is in the right spot and this is very relatable. Even though it's mostly hard for me ...

Hey diphylleia! This is great, I love it! A few notes about grammar: Do you know what means that ? "Do you know what does that means" will be better. ...

Hey Horisun! That's such a great story. It's funny and a little sad at the same time. It has hope and I like it. Here are my notes: "'I’m so ...

Hey there! You've done some really good job. This story is heartwarming and interesting, I enjoyed reading it. Here are my notes: "Why can't I just do this? he asked ...

Hey Plume! That's. So. Creepy! I'm usually not into horror, and I think I do like this script because of the fact the scary part comes in the end, when ...

Hey Em16! Great script. Very good wording. As @Valkyria, I totally think the interacrion of Rosalie with the audience contributes to their relationship, gets the audience closer to Rosalie and ...

Amazing. I love the format, the organized directing notes, the atmosphere you created... It's all there to support this moving script. The twist at the end is very surprising. The ...

Awsome! I love scripts, because they challenge the writer to make a whole plot by only using dialouge. No one explains the story for the reader, and the reader has ...