ofmiceandshailla

i'm just going to change this to chapter 2 and thanks

Thanks i'll fix it.

No problem and thank you! c:

I think this poem is really cute. I love how you're also directly talking to the reader.I found myself smiling before I was even done with it.It's so simple yet ...

I really like this poem. I love how it's short yet it says so much. It really captures the longing a person can have for a close for a friend ...

You're right she doesn't have to kill him.But theres something different about her she can't control herself when she's taking blood and shes also more powerful then regular vampires.

lol thanks the thing is she's done it a lot before but she hates the feeling of killing people even though shes done it before.I'll be sure to try and ...

Thank you I'll be sure to fix it c:

I love this poem so really tells how a young writer or any writer feels when a piece of writing doesn't go the way it was planned. I've felt this ...