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Hi Beast! It has been a while since I have reviewed anything and your piece caught my interest so here we go! The way you begin your piece is great, ...

I had absolutely no idea where this story was going from the beginning, but I loved it through and through! It really captured the emotions of a new mother, the ...

First off, I really enjoyed this story! You have a way of knowing how to get from point A to point B to point Z fairly well. I think that ...

Hi there Lael! First and foremost, great work! It is awesome when one can write a poem that is relatively short but hold a lot of meaning. I really feel ...

Hi Silented1! Your poem really touches a heavy topic. I think that in this day and age, we have to think heavily on morality, given the circumstances of the world ...

Hi Elinor! Your writing style is very clear and to the point, which makes this story very easy to follow. That's a good thing, as some writers go overboard and ...

Hi Koino! I hope its okay I shortened your user! Your poem is very beautiful and I enjoyed reading it very much. There are a few things I would like ...

Hello Em! I hope it is okay to call you that! I love your poem! I think it is very relatable to readers and romantics alike! I love the fact ...

Hello Lavvie! I will start off by saying you are a wonderful writer! I absolutely enjoyed reading this poem. I think we often write better when it is for people ...

Hi anne! Hope it's okay that I shortened your username! I really love the idea you have with this poem, and I think if you continue working on it you ...

Hello again Buranko! This is a really cool piece and I enjoyed reading it! I love that you write about how writing is an adventure, because that it is. An ...

Hi Lael! I really enjoyed reading your poem! It is short and sweet, eh, not so sweet when thinking of impending doom, huh? It is interesting to think of animals ...

Hi Stringbean! Your poem was well thought out and executed beautifully! You are a wonderful writer. I love the simplicity. I think as human beings we often underestimate ourselves, but ...

Hello Buranko! This is a lengthy poem! You sound experienced! I enjoyed reading this. First, let me say that I was surprised that it was about rain/a storm because people ...

Hello again Silver! I am pretty sure I reviewed one of your other poems, nice to see ya again! This poem is very cool and very realistic, I'm sure many ...