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Hello! Here for another review of your work :) I like this piece because I felt that you answered a lot of questions that had been left hanging in the ...

Hello! This piece was very interesting though I did get a little confused at points but that is easy to correct :) Also really loved your title, it sounds so ...

Hello! I liked this piece even though I didn't quite know what was going on at the start (but I suppose if I read the book I would). Positives- I ...

Hello, Mage! Here for another review of your amazing book, seriously though this chapter made me smile just reading it :D Positives- I love your characters, they are simply amazing ...

Hello again! Another really great chapter, well done! :D Positives- I love how realistic this piece is, the main character is very relatable. Her emotions are really on show in ...

Hello again! This was a really great chapter and a good start to a book :) Positives- This chapter has some really great features in it. For example, the characters ...

Hello again! Well, this was certainly very different from the first chapter :D Positives- I really love the concept for this book because I haven't read many books that start ...

Hello again! Another great chapter, you were able to capture my attention once again. Positives- In this chapter, you created even more mystery that grabs at the writer's attention and ...

Hello, Mage! I thought this piece was really quite funny when you got into the piece and found out the character was a ghost, really good work! Positives- I liked ...

Hello! I really liked this piece, it left me wondering what was going on. Maybe a small amount of information would be nice but I still think it's good. Positives- ...

Hello! Ahh, this was so cute, sad as well but mainly cute :) Positives- Firstly I like that you were able to add in information, there was quite a bit ...

Hello! I really enjoyed reading this piece, I love the first person style because you can become really attached to the characters. Positives- I love Ella, as a vivid book ...

Hello! Okay, I feel that this prologue has a lot of potential but right it's a little bit too long and had way too much information. Positives- The end section ...

Hello! Wow! This piece was intense, especially towards the end, and very surprising. The twist at the end, I wasn't expecting that. Positives- The characters were amazing and relatable. For ...

Hello! This piece was great, it flowed very well and was well written. Positives- I like your style, it was very different from a lot I have read. It was ...