occasionalpessimist

There are very few mistakes in here, but they are extremely obvious, I'm afraid. I'm not in a nitpicky mood, but I'll just gloss over each. While you should avoid ...

I like this story. Even if I'm not usually a fan of romance. Even with the cliffhanger at the end, I'm not sure about what you've added to this chapter ...

Um, thank you for posting this. I can finally tell all my Farmville-addict friends that I'm a geek for the greater good. :D Honestly, what's so great about planting a ...

Muharhar. Being your sister gives me full permission to char-grill your story. it was simply awesome, except for a few points I've highlighted below... There were two doors in the ...

This poem was simply amazing. i loved it. Do keep writing. And don't listen to whoever just posted above this, they don't know what they're talking about. This poem was ...

Ecclesiastic mumblings I liked your poem. It was... felt, I suppose. I've felt like that before. Retelling the stories everyone calls paroxysms :?: 'Paroxysms' are sudden outbursts of emotion. If ...

Good point... even I'll stick with nerds. I liked this, though this is more neutral Humor article than a story, get what I mean? Keep writing! :) - Alexandra Merry ...

Hey! I liked this. Even if I'm not into the torture-esque stuff. Even while the content was good, I have a problem: The paragraphs. They were humongously huge, and painful ...

Lovely poem. Really touching. I enjoyed reading it, but I still have a few things to point out. I'm not in a very nitpicky mood, so I'm not going to ...

I've seen that you tend to use light and dark very often, as points of comparison. Not that it's bad or anything, but actually quite effective. However... What happens when ...

So. This article is one of the funniest I've read that follows this perspective. Not just funny, but it set me thinking. I mean, I'm a transvestite, but I've never ...