nykolasandrews

thank you so much :) i appreciate you taking the time to comment. i was a bit hesitant to post this

hello there! thanks for reviewing my poem :) i'm going to work on changing the first two stanzas a little to remove some of the "see/seen" stuff and i didn't ...

ah thanks for the review! I did use "see" a lot, so i'll find a way to change it up a little :) i just sort of wrote this and ...

i was considering titling it "weeping willow" but i decided on "sunshine" just because it sort of further reinforces all of the progress i have made since i started as ...

thank you for your review. i do get what you mean by the repetition, so i'm gonna find a way to change the last stanza or just remove it. i'm ...

thank you so much ! it does have a nostalgic feel for me as well, and it feels good

thank you so much for your review :) reviews like this are what keep me writing

If the formatting looks off, please let me know! Thanks! It’s in stanzas on my iPad, but if it’s all just single spaced for you, let me know!

Thank you for your kind words :) I definitely understand what you mean, and if I decide to revisit this one, I'll make a few changes! I appreciate you taking ...

do you ever think of me? it seems all i do is think of you your memory haunts me but why? you were a huge chapter in my story, but ...

Sorry, I accidentally forgot to make it a review ^^"

Thank you so much for your compassion and time.

I see your points. And I thank you for your time. I will make all of the necessary edits. I think I'm going to rewrite this in much more detail.

Thanks for the review. I put in the comma because you were right. With the "when you can even sleep" thing, I was saying that applies to the situation when ...

First, I wanna thank you for reviewing this. Second, I wanna express my surprise at my lack of grammar errors. I haven't read over this in a while. About a ...