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Re: i visited our childhood home (you weren't in it)
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Apr 11, 2024
This piece has a hauntingly beautiful quality to it. The imagery you've used creates a vivid picture of nostalgia and longing. The repetition of certain motifs, like the engraved tree ... -
Re: gotham's forbidden garden
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Apr 11, 2024
This poem offers a provocative reinterpretation of the story of Adam, Eve, and Lilith in the Garden of Eden, challenging traditional notions of gender roles and power dynamics. By centering ... -
Re: The Brother
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Apr 11, 2024
This poem delves into themes of regret, self-realization, and the consequences of one's choices. The contrast between light and darkness symbolizes the dichotomy of the speaker's emotional state, as w -
Re: Games
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Apr 11, 2024
This poem explores themes of disillusionment and betrayal within the context of relationships. The speaker reflects on their discomfort with playing games and their realization of being part of someon -
Re: Gone Ghost
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Apr 11, 2024
This poem captures a sense of invisibility and incompleteness, evoking a feeling of being faded and driven mad by past experiences. The repetition of "only here" emphasizes a transient existence, ... -
Re: Runaway- chapter 3.
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Jan 19, 2024
i literally want to marry Sigma like hes so fine i love him so much. i can guarantee that he has at least a good seven inches . i want ...
