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Hi there. Funnily enough, I do really like this poem. It's simplicty really hits home, and delivers your opinion on 'love'. What is love but a word? An overused phrase? ...

Hello. I wont go through the poem throughly, as the above reviewer already has done. This is a good poem, but it could be great. Punctuation is your friend, and ...

Rage, pounding, thoughts hounding, Screaming, hurling, hatred swirling. -Very good first group of lines. Fast and it flows, which gets you straight into the rhythm of the poem. You get ...

This is a fairly okay poem. I understand that 'truth' is what the theme of the poem is, but... you don't need to CONSTANTLY repeat it. this makes the poem ...

This is really good! The contrast of bad and good is really powerful along with outlining the obvious dangers. I also liked the little touch of making the last two ...

This is quietly powerful. It's bring the thought of, is love really love, to the boil. When I started to read it, I thought it was gonna be another poem ...

Good day. After looking over your poem i do have to say that im not very fond of it, nor does it show a whole lot of literal OR artistic ...

Hello. When I saw the cover of this, All The Faces - Inspiration, I was hoping for a really indepth poem. Maybe about multiple-personality-disorder. I didn't expect this. The theme ...

Hello. Looking at the poem theres a few changes that i'd do. They're not neccersairly a critizism, but, what my personal opinion and thought is on it. Dead Magic. Her ...

I'm sorry but this poem is in the wrong place! :( Of course its got something to do with calligraphy, as you said in that snippet of text you write, ...

*cough cough* Remind me what the point of this is? You hate Adobe Reader. Fine. We get that from the first couple of lines. That's a statement, not a poem. ...

Oh, no, dont put yourself down about it. It's good to use anything and everything to create insperation as long as you dont just copy it all for word by ...

This is a rather pleasant poem and I can certainly think of a situation I've been in when all I've done is sit in a bus and just watch the ...

Bonjuor. Cap.R. Im sorry to say but this poem has too many flaurs. Firstly you make a major contradiction by saying that 'Rain is salvation' which says the complete opposite ...

Seems like you've re-adjusted your poem then! :) This is rather nice, but there is a few issues. Firstly, theres is a whole lot of spelling and punctuation errors, make ...