This poem is for a drawing Im currently doing. Its sorta cut off in a way, because thats how I need it in the drawing(Plus I cant find a way to end it, lol, so the ending sucks!). Im practicing Calligraphy, and this would help me alot, but I dont want to waste my pens on a poem that might not be any good. So, please, reviews would be great! ![]()
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Wow, I really enjoyed reading this. I really felt the emotion that was written in this poem, and I also can picture this going on. It really had depth to it, and that is very nice. I also liked the whole idea of the mask. So I really don't have anything bad to say
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I'm sorry but this poem is in the wrong place!

Of course its got something to do with calligraphy, as you said in that snippet of text you write, but if its something impaticular you need to post it in the Poetry - Other forum. Sorry!
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