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title is subject to change (title and chapter) tell me what you think review me without holding back Chapter 2 – rain drops I distinctly heard the sound of rain ...

this is just a rough draft. I plan on changing many things, so don't judge it too hard =] (title is subject to change) Chapter 1 – hide and seek ...

Hello,PoeticGlow, I'm Des. Your poem was good. It gives readers a clear understanding of the enticing, temptation and indulges of cocaine. Does the part with "...the sweat runs down your ...

I have finally written a piece that isn't bin worthy. I wouldn't say that.... it's not THAT good....... :lol: Just messing, I really liked this and it was well-writen and ...

Alright Poltergeist. I really enjoyed reading this, you've got a knack for descriptive writing. Just a few small areas for improvement: Khor heard crashes and bangs coming from somewhere in ...

I totally agree about Neville, and to a great extent the others, seeming emotionless and not filled with the grief they surely would have felt. One part of the plot ...

To be perfectly honest, I don't enjoy reading poetry that much and as a novice that certainly wasn't terrible. Personally, you've not got enough suspense in it. In writing, I ...

My whole post is going to contain spoilers, so I'd better just put the alerts all right at the start.... :wink: [spoiler]Well JK Rowling said that there would be a ...