noridori

'illegal aliens' is such a disgusting term. no matter what country you come from, we're all the same species. the fact that some people can think others are 'less than' ...

i spotted your recent review and wanted to check you out lol. the short description of this piece immediately drew me in and i’m glad it did. i really enjoy ...

wow, this is definitely better than anything i wrote at your age. i especially like the twists, i can tell that’s one of your strengths. also autumn calling frogbert ‘kid’ ...

ö this is a really compelling piece. i'm usually a bit hesitant to leave reviews on poems because you can't really 'judge' them in the same way as prose, the ...

this was really intriguing, i like your opening. sleep deprivation can really mess with a persons mind so it's makes a great premise for supernatural or paranormal stories. i also ...

this was a great read. though this is something i've pondered myself, i've never actually seen anyone speak directly on "cringe", "main character syndrome" and the other things you touch ...

you can really feel the emotion in this one. you mention a lot of things like sitting next to people and still feeling lonely that feel very nuanced. when you ...

this is definitely a unique concept. the story itself feels very heavily like a dream nearly all the way through, but i really like that you made it open to ...

this is a really interesting premise, i think. i like the shift from a seemingly 'normal' school with bullies and diaries to a huge, pink, sparkly door. i wonder if ...

wow, this is taking a different turn than what i expected. to me it seemed from the earlier chapters like there was some imminent tragedy about to affect their dad, ...

ARTHUR GODALMING!! sorry, that was just where my brain went as soon as i read arthur emerson. although i guess his name was technically arthur holmwood? i don't know, that ...

hey! so i know it's been over a month since this was posted, but all the best reviewers are 'fashionably late'... right? anyway, i thought i'd pop in and deliver ...

hello there! i know it's been a little while since you posted this but i thought i might give my thoughts anyway :3 first of all i have to mention ...

woahh... i loved this prologue! you do a great job with the characters and the world, and it makes me really excited to see where you'll take this. i'll definitely ...

hi there, and welcome to YWS!! i really liked the fable-esque feeling of this piece, and i'm curious as to how it fits into a longer story. i think the ...