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Re: Anastasia’s origin: Witch’s wonder, Hell’s hate
can rat tails bend unnaturally? i always pictured them kind of like noodles, flexible in all directions... though, surely the rat must have had more injures than a broken tail ...
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Re: Tale of the flowers
hello! this piece feels really cozy, especially the beginning. the light creating a warmth and gigi enjoying some peaceful sleep work together to create a very nice atmosphere. though, the ...
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Re: Is Nihilism a product of comfort rather than suffering?
700 wives? damn... also, it's a bit ironic for Solomon to say 'love your spouse' when he had 700 of them, isn't it? though that's just one girl's opinion. and ...
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Re: Something's Got To Break You Down
hello there, fellow team lemonade! i went into this expecting an essay, but it seems i got in a bit over my head... usually i try to avoid reviewing poetry, ...
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Re: Alice-Alice and the aliens
hello there creeperfeverdreams! i have to say i'm not entirely sure which part of the story this is, but it feels a bit like a prologue? maybe a bit more ...
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Re: Birds of a Fellther CHP 2 {UNDERFELL FANFICTION}
a great follow up of chapter one, in my opinion. what i know of the undertale universe is basically that there was a war that led to all the monsters ...
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Re: Room 214
your title drew me in, it reminded me of the swedish book Room 213 (rum 213). to me, this reads as a classic rivals-to-lovers in a school setting, and you ...
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Re: The girl and the monster: Chapter 1
this was posted a while ago by now, but in the name of review day i'll leave my thoughts anyway :3 i am a little bit confused about the monster's ...
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Re: I BLEED. RED - Chapter One: YOU ARE YOU. I AM ME
woah, i really love this piece. i love the tone and dystopian feel of this world. i also like the dynamics between paris and yosemina, and between yosemina and clause. ...
May 30 -
Re: Shadow (Chapter 1: Party Time?)
hey! this is my first time reading something from either of you and what a great first impression! i really enjoyed this piece a lot. though i wonder why you ...
May 30 -
Re: DEER EYES chapter 1
hello there! this seems like a very charming contemporary fiction so far. andrea seems like a very hard-working, though maybe a bit unlucky, character and i'm curious to see what's ...
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Re: You're A Weapon
i admittedly haven't played cyberpunk, but dbh is one of my favorite games of all time so these characters are definitely intriguing to me. this is just my personal opinion, ...
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Re: Thorne's Super Awesome Complete Guide To Surviving The Apocalypse -- Ch. 1
such an interesting premise! when i read the title i admittedly thought it would be a zombie-type of situation (and i am a sucker for those...), but i can't say ...
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Re: The Addicted Roundup Chap.4
wow! finally they all meet, how intriguing... also what a fun little detail that both alaric and the other guy are burying someone in the woods. i really hope we ...
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Re: The Addicted Roundup Chap.3
hello there! i hope you're not getting tired of me dropping reviews on these pieces lolol i just wanted to start off by saying this is wayy better in terms ...
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