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Re: Three Lines of Three, Haikus, Perhaps
Hallo waiting, am here to review for you today, and bravo to your frozen fingers. First I must say that yes, these certainly are Haikus. Even if you don't want ...
Feb 13, 2013 -
Re: No Words
A very short review here for you today. This certainly was an interesting read. Though mind you, it certainly took a turn that I wasn't expecting. The more violent ending ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: A poem written in a minute
Hallo. A very short, flash review here for you today! This certainly is a good poem, despite the fact that it was written in a minute. The rhyme scheme is ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: Situational Irony in "The Lottery"
A short and brief review here today. Once again you've written a rather good article (you seem to have a talent for this). Your wording and sentences are clear and ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: What is Art?
Hallo there! I'm here to review this article today! :D This certainly was an interesting an thoughtful piece on what is art. I certainly like the comparison of art to ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: Love is Endless
A quick and brief review here for you today. You've certainly started off with an interesting idea. Though frankly, the constant referrals to both love and flowers became rather annoying ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: Flower People
Hallo there, me here for a quick, brief review today. :) This story is rather sweet and cute. The idea of little flower people is different and slightly amusing. At ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: Rescue Me
I don't normally review lyrics, but I am desperate for last minute reviews in the YWS cup. So warning, this will be very short and brief. I certainly almost instantly ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: lies
Hallo. I'm here to review for you today. :) I must say, in a way, this poem is rather sentimental. It has a good idea behind it, but the grammar ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: I'm a dust bunnyy
Hallo Persy! Another review from the local ninja here for you today! :D Before I get into the nitty gritty, is the extension of "bunny" in the title on purpose ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: when it could be a lie *revised*
Hallo Scar! I don't believe I've ever reviewed for you before. :) 'Bout time I get to it then. I found the content of this poem rather confusing at first ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: Army of Justice
Hallo. Noninjaspresent here to review for you today, and also, welcome to YWS. Now, I always hate writing negative / harsh reviews and I always try to add some sort ...
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: Reflecting; a TKAM Artifact
Hallo there! Noninjaspresent here to review for you! First off, I must say that this article was well written despite the occasional lack of spacing between some of the words ...
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: Marijuana Legalization
Hello. Noninjaspresent here to review your article today. My general impression on this piece is that you've written a well-spoken and logical essay that makes a great argument for the ...
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: The Blond Streak
Hallo there lilcanich, noninjaspresent here to review for you. :D I found this poem rather sweet but sorrowful. The limerick-esk rhyme mixed in with the free flow of words of ...
Feb 7, 2013
