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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Three Lines of Three, Haikus, Perhaps

    Hallo waiting, am here to review for you today, and bravo to your frozen fingers. First I must say that yes, these certainly are Haikus. Even if you don't want ...

    Feb 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: No Words

    A very short review here for you today. This certainly was an interesting read. Though mind you, it certainly took a turn that I wasn't expecting. The more violent ending ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: A poem written in a minute

    Hallo. A very short, flash review here for you today! This certainly is a good poem, despite the fact that it was written in a minute. The rhyme scheme is ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, Narrative Re: Situational Irony in "The Lottery"

    A short and brief review here today. Once again you've written a rather good article (you seem to have a talent for this). Your wording and sentences are clear and ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Other » Other, General Re: What is Art?

    Hallo there! I'm here to review this article today! :D This certainly was an interesting an thoughtful piece on what is art. I certainly like the comparison of art to ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Love is Endless

    A quick and brief review here for you today. You've certainly started off with an interesting idea. Though frankly, the constant referrals to both love and flowers became rather annoying ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Flower People

    Hallo there, me here for a quick, brief review today. :) This story is rather sweet and cute. The idea of little flower people is different and slightly amusing. At ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Rescue Me

    I don't normally review lyrics, but I am desperate for last minute reviews in the YWS cup. So warning, this will be very short and brief. I certainly almost instantly ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: lies

    Hallo. I'm here to review for you today. :) I must say, in a way, this poem is rather sentimental. It has a good idea behind it, but the grammar ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm a dust bunnyy

    Hallo Persy! Another review from the local ninja here for you today! :D Before I get into the nitty gritty, is the extension of "bunny" in the title on purpose ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: when it could be a lie *revised*

    Hallo Scar! I don't believe I've ever reviewed for you before. :) 'Bout time I get to it then. I found the content of this poem rather confusing at first ...

    Feb 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Army of Justice

    Hallo. Noninjaspresent here to review for you today, and also, welcome to YWS. Now, I always hate writing negative / harsh reviews and I always try to add some sort ...

    Feb 7, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Reflecting; a TKAM Artifact

    Hallo there! Noninjaspresent here to review for you! First off, I must say that this article was well written despite the occasional lack of spacing between some of the words ...

    Feb 7, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Politics, General Re: Marijuana Legalization

    Hello. Noninjaspresent here to review your article today. My general impression on this piece is that you've written a well-spoken and logical essay that makes a great argument for the ...

    Feb 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Blond Streak

    Hallo there lilcanich, noninjaspresent here to review for you. :D I found this poem rather sweet but sorrowful. The limerick-esk rhyme mixed in with the free flow of words of ...

    Feb 7, 2013


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