noelsugarcube

wow O_O. that was deep man. It kinda represents not only American society, but other nations as well. This shows the mind of a child who can't understand the world ...

Oh, random note to readers, i am planning to change this story ENTIRELY due to the fact that it's just plain lame. in my opinion, the plot is good, but ...

Whoot whoot! we change this one, so check 'er out again!

thxs for reading my cruddy work. so, as for the convo depth, it is suppose to be this way to draw peeps like you in. like some peeps would be ...

srry, i've been doing other stuff(mostly likely less important than this) but i'll try to post the next ch. srry for the wait!

u told me i could

hehe, yeah, i told sushi that it should be "rats", buuut, she didn't listen. but don't matter now, but i feel "prostitute" doesn't flow well, so yeah. probably don't want ...

thxs for your comment! all i can say is that it is fun working with sushi, but we sometimes argue about what happens next. hahaha! anyways, enjoy/read our next installment ...

HIYA! Noel here to say, Sushi-san and me spent lik, 5 days on this(well, mostly cause i couldn't get on, but not the point). So yeah, we're proud of this, ...

ok, yeah, started with my history test is stereotypical, and i personally really really wanted a different end to this piece. buuuut, i couldn't think of a better ending. so ...

thxs for critiquing! well, i feel the need to explain myself. for starters, there's a lack of detail to make readers like you to be confused. and this is a ...

thxs for your input! well, vagueness was the point of this piece. as for the actions, well, they may be revealed later in the story(if I ever get to it ...

thxs for your critique! but just as a personal pride thing(? what ever. shut up conscience!)the dialogue currently is vague to confuse readers, and the setting will be more in ...

lol, this is serious(i think?) but i can't help laughing for some strange reason.... i don't fully understand this, but i still think u put a lot of thought into ...

Oh yeah, just as a random note, this really, really reminds me of some songs from my current fav visual-kei band, The gazette. check em out on utube, and if ...