ninjafashion

I applaud you for writing on such a 'open' topic such as life. You had a very clear vision for the poem and it showed in the length and how ...

"devoured by the thirsty tongues of flame" - Amazing! The imagery in this poem is amazing, I was cognizant every single line of the poem and it read incredibly easy ...

Your feelings and the expression of them is ALWAYS valid, so I commend you on using a poetry as a form of expression, and being brave enough to share it ...

There is a cyclic element in the poem which is really interesting, the opening and the closing stanzas are poetically synchronized and symbolizes how we do not always deal with ...

I definitely agree with Rainn. The current structuring in your poem takes away from certain poetic elements which could compliment the poem and carry more weight. The stanzas and punctuation ...

Your emotions are valid and I can see you really trying to express whatever it is your feeling in the poem. I have to be honest and say that it ...

I love duality between the simplicity of the writing and the intensity of the subject. Well structured, well written poem! I Love it!