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Hey Arif, I only have a little time to do a review but I just wanted to say a couple things I noticed in this particular poem. I like the ...

Hey Harshita, I think you did a really good job with this first of all. As someone who focuses on structure, though, there are a couple things that stand out ...

Hey Becca, I saw more stuff about content in the previous reviews, so my obvious inclination is to talk about the structure. The content's great, the imagery close to immaculate. ...

Hi Ryia, Well, it's apparent that you had some strong emotions while writing this piece, which is definitely good. It talks about events we as humans go through on a ...

It's as if you took a dictionary, flipped through it, pointed at a word, and said "ok I have to use this somehow." Or, I don't know, maybe it was ...

Hi Cosmo, First, I like the description you used "fire-blooming, tears of flower dew, humming breezy blur." But, as the previous reviewer said, in order to be a sonnet, the ...

Hi Tenyo, First, I'd like to point out the strengths of the poem. The emotion is very strong as a result of your choice of words which is always good, ...

Hi Sbitoni! First, I'd like to compliment the interesting structure and rhyme scheme you used for this poem. The imagery was also very good. One criticism I do have is ...

Hi Skyaejin! As it's review day I thought I'd give my two cents on a few poems, and this one certainly spoke to me. I have to be honest, I'm ...

Hi Yazi! I'm a huge fan of rhyming poetry, so I liked that aspect. The flow was good as far as meter goes. I will say, however, the third quarter ...