niccinic15

I don't really understand this? I mean, the flow and everything goes together pretty well, I just don't pick up on the deeper meaning... For every person, There's a count ...

I like it. A lot. I feel a personal connection with it, as my significant other just moved to Florida, and I'm still in Kentucky :/ But anyways... Holding to ...

This frustrated me... Quite badly, actually. To start with, I don't understand the very first line: The lost night, in the moment, the warm sunny day, twists away Is it ...

Your idea here was good, but I'm not really sure if I'm liking this too much... I like the repetition of how it seemed like just yesterday, and I like ...

First of all, "If I Die Young" is the only country song I like, and it's inspired me as well. I loved this poem. I also wrote one about a ...

I like the main idea of this poem, the personification of betrayal was a great idea. However some things didn't rest well with me... Uncaring, unfeeling for the pain she ...

I like this, but there are a couple of things that don't rest well with me.... A cut runs down my heart’s face, leaving it crying little red teardrops. I ...

First off, I love this (: Obsession creeps within my survival instincts, twisting the inclination to lengthen my days to make room for the willingness to die for You, if ...

I like this piece. A lot of deep, dark emotion is portrayed here. Just a few minor things. Next to plauge my failing heart It's "plague", just saying (: Another ...

This was kind of different for me, but I think I liked it? So what if there wasn't a lot of emotion thrown into it, it was different, and creative ...