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Thanks so much for your review! I'll post more soon, hopefully with an illustration or two :)

Hi Lava! Thanks so much for your review. I may post revisions later, and I'll get the next chapter up (illustration included) hopefully this weekend! :)

Hello JohnLocke1, thanks for your review! It was extremely helpful. The present tense thing is just a trial, I'll likely nix it. I also do want to slow things down ...

I'm just trying to figure out coding, can we still italicize things and quote things? It's been a while since I've commented and the formatting is different.

Magnus, thanks so much for your review. I am still very early in the writing process for this series, which is why I'm posting here, to get a sense of ...

Thanks AriaAdams! I am excited to hear that you found this interesting. I will post more very soon!

Hi stelagineva, thank you for your comment! I will definitely post more soon. It's a bit interesting, because this will actually be an illustrated novel, so I'm not sure if ...

Hi Lycando! This is indeed a prologue; I added that bit of information now so it's more clear. Thanks for your comment! I'll post more soon!

To lilmisswritergirl: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And I appreciate your words :wink: I probably will continue this later on!

To Merry_Haven: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. And i've gathered most of my knowledge about regency from Jane Austen's works, and so my writing reflects her style ...

To NixonBlitzen: Thank you! I appreciate the nitpicking! :wink: It helps me improve my writing! We each were mourned in our own separate ways. This sentence doesn't make sense gramatically. ...

To Lost_In_Dreamland: Thank you! And I do agree with you about the conclusion. I wrote this entire piece in one sitting (because of my procrastination, and this being an assignment) ...

To Lost_In_Dreamland: Thank you! I appreciate all the corrections and criticisms! I do suffer with some grammar and usage :D It helps to be corrected! And really, thank you. I ...

Angel of Death, thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it! I really don't like writing unfortunate endings, but we were covering Anti-Transcendentalism, and I felt a pessimistic ending ...