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To Merry_Haven: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. And i've gathered most of my knowledge about regency from Jane Austen's works, and so my writing reflects her style a bit.
I really do enjoy the character type of Mr. Darcy and Edgar.
Also, I've considered writing a regency novel, but I don't really have the time or skill to yet lol. But, in the future, I definitely will! It's such a fun period to write and read about.
*naturesgirl~
That arrogant and jerk-ish man, who always has to have his way.
What?! That's it? That's the end? Sad. Sad. Sad.
Well, I guess my thoughts were wrong. I truly wanted Adrianna to be happy with Landon (well mostly him) or with any other gentleman. And certainly not Edgar.
Edgar reminded me a lot of Mr. Darcy (Pride and Prejudice), just a little bit.
Anyway, this was well done. Have you ever thought of writing more Regency-set novels? I would definitely read them!
Great job!
*Merry
To Lost_In_Dreamland:
And I will take your critiques and let them improve my writing. Thanks again!

Thank you! And I do agree with you about the conclusion. I wrote this entire piece in one sitting (because of my procrastination, and this being an assignment) so I never did take much time to really think over certain parts of it. I've really only done little bits of editing and that's it
Also, I hope I didn't give you the impression I was begging for a review by suggesting to read this part! (though they are quite hard to come by, they take so much time!) And I appreciate that you did
Author's Note: Apologies for the length of this piece! But I found that i really can't shorten it! Please, again, critique. It is much needed and much appreciated.
Miss Adrianna Barker
(Second Half)
Good start; I like how you refer to her being 'plagued' with ill health. However, I feel that the word 'in' should change, I just don't think it fits. Maybe replace it with During. *muses*
Didn't you mean across country? Or am I completely obtuse? Sorry if I am
Question mark after what. I wouldn't use a '-' either. I'd have a full stop/period here.
Hmm... as much as the old language you use works really well, I don't think this bit does. I am, of course, the biggest hypocrite ever when it comes to this, though, I do it all the time
Favor, is that the same as favour? Sorry if I'm wrong, but here we spell it favour, you may spell it differently though xD Wow! The language here is impeccable, brilliant
Again; colored is the same as coloured, right? We spell that differently too.
Here I think perhaps the elipses should come after offer instead of for.
Very good language, but new should be knew.
I wonder why you have repeated Adrianna's name so many times. Is this narrator partial to Leonard? Otherwise they should not refer to Leonard as dear, that should just be Adrianna. This part is a bit rushed too. Why did she agree to marry him? We need to see more insight when she discovers Landon isn't home. We need to know why she gave up on her ideals and married Owens. Why? We yearn for more information and you need to give us it. I suggest that you completely rewrite the ending, still make it sad by all means, but change it. It's too rushed and just doesn't fit your style. Also, the narrative changes from old language to more modern prose.
There should be an apostrohpe after Owens.
I like the index thing
Overall this was good. Very good. The dialogue was great, and for all that Mr Owens is an old git
Well done
Kirsten xxx
Angel of Death, thank you!
I've been trying to get a bit more research done on this time period and such, and trying to get used to writing longer works!

I am so glad you enjoyed it! I really don't like writing unfortunate endings, but we were covering Anti-Transcendentalism, and I felt a pessimistic ending to it would be more likely to up my grade. (My teacher's not to fond of these kinds of stories.) As far as writing a novel, I've considered it
Anyway, thank you very much!
What a very sad ending!
I did like Owen until his true colors broke free, but you did a great job taking the masks off of your characters and she gave up happiness for a better life for her family, what a brave girl. Again, I didn't find anything wrong and this second part mirrored the first: beautifully written.
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Mr. Owens may be a jerk but he sure knows how to talk.
Keep Writing,
~Angel