Young Writers Society

Hi! This was really good. At first I thought it would be another teen supernatural story where the girl would fall for the guy. I was quite surprised and delighted ...

Hi! This was perfect! It was really cute and so interesting to read. From the moment I started reading it I knew it was going to be something special. I ...

Hi! First off I have a few grammar mistakes that I saw: We stood there like a statue waiting Should be: We stood there like statues waiting( has to be ...

Thanks for alerting me about the second piece of writing! This was also really great. You kept me engaged in the story and it was easy to read. I believe ...

Hi! First off: Love this poem! I am truly a sucker for rhyming poems and found this to be supremely wonderful. You captured the beach feel well. When I first ...

Hi! First you just have a few errors: The sounds were drowned out when my stomach started to growl. I still haven't found anything to eat. Should be: The sounds ...

Great job on this palindrome. It was short but very effective and to the point. You really did a great job because when I read it both ways it had ...

Hi! So first off I've never heard of a palindrome but this is really amazing. I don't know if the poem is related to your fears but I fear that ...

Hi! So first I want to day this was interesting to read. I get the feeling this is sort of middle ages as well. I must say it has a ...

Hi! So first off I want to say this was a nice poem. I usually don't read poetry but this resonated with me a bit. I liked the beginning but ...

Hi! This is a really cute poem. For some reason this had a Great Gatsby feel to me. Longing for someone even and wanting them. (Like how Gatsby still wanted ...

HI! So this was different from what I usually read but pretty interesting. Kayfornight pretty much covered some of things I was going to say.I do find the story pretty ...

Hi! I don't know much about anime but I found the story pretty interesting. However I found it mostly confusing (don't take this the wrong way please). In the beginning ...

Hi! Most people went over the grammar which is good because I'm not that great at it! But back to the review. I like the overall idea that you have. ...

This is interesting and very action jam packed. I think you did a great job describing everything I could imagine it in my head as a movie actually. There are ...