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Hey there. First off, I loved this poem, the mood captured quite well with your wording and vivid imagery. (Spelling?). Since the punctuation has been revised, I won't redo it. ...

This was a really great poem. It gave me a vivd image of each point of refference to where you live. A really great poem, with the name fitting it ...

I'll start out by saying that I loved the poem. But as other s have said, I would consider this more dark than creepy, persay. The only spelling mistake I ...

[quote="567ajt"] He was a very mild mannered man you see, always apologising whenever he had a fit of anger on some unlucky girl who wants to go home. He’s also ...

I completely loved this story. It kept me on edge, and kept a mysterious tone, not letting too much be revealed. I couldn't honestly find any spelling or grammatical errors ...

I have o agree with everyone else, this poem is great, and I can relate to an extent. I have a slight case of insomnia, and yes, it's awful. But, ...

I really enjoyed this, and I usually have a distaste for play format. But I believe play format was very helpful with this story, as it holds alot of dialogue. ...

I really enjoyed this story, it was suspensful, well written, used great deatil, and was great all over! I don't know if I will be nitpicking with grammatical errors, because ...

I really enjoyed the chapter, it was great! However, I feel that it was a bit fast paced, him being captured, knocked out, and waking back up. Alot of the ...

I really enjoyed this, although it elt a bit like a prologue, being a bit short and all. I enjoyed the suspense, it kept and held my attention. The title ...

I really enjoyed this poem. The lines and stanzas were well divided, and this was without gramatical or spelling error. I liked the tone of the poem. With what DevanEWilliams ...

I like the poem, it has alot of potential. But I think it needs to be worked on. Using abbreviations in poetry isn't usually a recommendation. And you should divide ...

I really liked the poem. The idea was well explained throughout, and actually getting it to rhyme nearly amazed me. (I usually have little sucess getting poems to rhyme.) "No ...