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Re: Confusion
It is said that the ultimate aim of art is to entertain and give joy. Your poem gave me that feeling of “elation” to copy your word. Strangely enough, this ...
Sun Jul 22, 2012 9:57 am -
Re: Self-Acceptance
I once read a book written by Neil Clark Warren, an American psychologist, entitled, “ Finding Contentment.” The author believes that if one is genuine, he can express himself freely ...
Sat Jul 21, 2012 2:08 pm -
Re: The Man's Man
I do like the original idea put forth in this concise and cute article. Cute, for it suggests a clever opinion that can seem rude to some men, the kind ...
Mon Jul 09, 2012 7:11 pm -
Re: Stay with me, until I fall asleep.
I once read a line in a book, which beautifully depicts a modern man crying out in anguish. Not tortured because he is in a desperate need of bread, or ...
Mon Jul 02, 2012 10:25 pm -
Re: Begin!
To Begin with, I say that Your "Begin" sounds like a journey towards purification, a cleansing of he soul; souls that have been long sunk in a deep pitch-black whole. ...
Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:03 am -
Re: Ode to: Scientists, Politicians, Prophets, et all...
Hello Personally I find this poem magnificent, I don't agree with the previous reviewer that it needs some changes for it to flow a bit a better. It's already perfect. ...
Tue Aug 02, 2011 9:37 am -
Re: Echoes
I totally agree with H. Smith. This piece takes me back in time when I used to sit on the back of the amphitheater years ago. I would listen carefully ...
Sun Jul 31, 2011 5:06 pm -
Re: Ch 9: A Love To Last More Than A Season
I find it very interesting in spite of the fact that I didn't read the first chapters. Your way of writing is incredible, I wish I can write a novel ...
Sun Jul 31, 2011 11:48 am -
Re: Goodbye
I will start from where you ended your poem" Death is a beginning". Here I clearly see the notion of immortality. I sense a kind of strong belief embedded firmly ...
Sat Jul 30, 2011 9:34 pm -
Re: Safety Poem
Frankly speaking I do appreciate the idea. this literary work looks like a piece of advice or let's say a lesson learned the hard way. We should listen to parents ...
Sat Jul 30, 2011 2:08 pm -
Re: Death of an Angel; Second Edit
short , precise and concise. A powerful message conveyed concisely. Let's see now if my reading of this piece is what you intended to impart to readers. First of all, ...
Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:24 pm -
Re: Slip Away
I am going to give you my own interpretation of the poem. The way I see it that you may disagree with. I feel that in the first part you ...
Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:17 pm -
Re: 11
I accept my flaws I reject all discouragement for I'm not perfect, but I'm not worthless. I love this part where you depict yourself in a humble manner. Telling the ...
Fri Jul 29, 2011 11:37 am -
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I am nothing like you. You are exactly like me. I choose not to be. There is no choice. If I'm like you, why doesn't this happen to me? Why ...
Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:06 am -
Re: Live
I really enjoyed it. precise and concise. To me it depicts the necessity to live and enjoy our lives to the fullest, whatever pain we feel there is always a ...
Thu Jul 28, 2011 6:23 pm
