When a person acts with complete confidence, even for insane purposes, it fills a void in us. Charismatic individuals make their followers do insane things by the force of their personalities. It proves the point that the force of a person’s will, of his self acceptance, can be so strong that he can change the view of the masses. He can convince people that what he is doing or saying is beautiful. People become fully accepting in his presence, falling prey to his complete self-acceptance! Later on, they might wonder how they could have fallen under that spell. Self acceptance is very attractive. The one who is most congruent will control the situation. If your frame is strong enough, you can get away with anything. Self acceptance gives you the freedom for fearless expression.
The expression of complete self acceptance is the inspiration that we all crave so much. When we see others expressing themselves with self acceptance, we feel a sense of acceptance towards what they are doing too. When we see it in others, we feel it in ourselves and for them and the universe. In that state, we feel acceptance for everything that that all is perfect. There is no rejection for those who have complete self acceptance and they can express themselves fearlessly. Self expression is total, immediate and without conception of time. You’ve got to have complete self expression in order to fully communicate what it is you want to communicate to another.
Most of us think that the right to create is for others, not for us. But inspired people show us by example what is possible for everyone. It’s as though there is a cosmic bank somewhere in the universe where the great ones have their accounts. The currency is unlimited creativity and ideas. The rest of us are always trying to borrow from their accounts. Do not borrow from anyone else’s account. We cannot recreate. We must create. Have the attitude that no one before has ever done what you are doing right now.
You have to have the arrogance to do what you want to do. Behind every action that you make and every word that you say is the belief that “this is the truth”. Do not believe in wrong actions. Believe that they are right ones because you are the one making them.Authenticity comes from the permission you give yourself to be a genius, to take something that is considered junk and proclaim “this is beautiful”. Power comes from being yourself. You can never get it by recreating. You have to create. For something to be real, it has to come from within you. Do not fear mistakes. There are none. Act as if you just didn’t have a care in the world!
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I once read a book written by Neil Clark Warren, an American psychologist, entitled, “ Finding Contentment.” The author believes that if one is genuine, he can express himself freely and have more self-esteem, therefore, reach the highest peak of joy. To him, bliss, is not in being incredibly rich or marvellously good-looking but, in being the person he was born to be. Your essay reminded me of this psychological treatise, except that what you call self-acceptance, the writer calls genuinity.
Before I impart some comments on the form and style, I would like to discuss the idea put forth in this article.
You apparently endeavored to underscore two major points in this paper: “Self- Acceptance” and how it leads to success in social life.Then, “Uniqueness” and how it paves the way for the creator’s original name and fame.
This idea strikes me in two different ways; first, it satisfies my soul and intellect. Second and most importantly, it gives us, readers, some rules on the proper way to behave when mingling with society. Since everyone is judged, there should be certain skills with which we can communicate, impress, and lead instead of being blindly guided like a herd of sheep. “Self-acceptance,” becomes accordingly an approach which help us integrate into the world of human insanities.
But as I proceed reading your essay, I notice an ambiguity in your argument. On the one hand you enumerate the advantages of being authentic, and on the other hand you implicitly claim that arrogance is an essential ingredient of creativity. I think you are confusing two different traits; arrogance and self-confidence.
Besides, I don’t believe that the road to artistic creation and individual genius is only through the refusal to imitate and borrow. Of course, you are allowed to be original in your thoughts and ideas but, “no letter can stand by itself”, as the saying goes. If inspiration mixed with some “stealing” from other traditional works of art brings about creation, I would still consider the creator an original artist.
Concerning the elements of style, I have a few remarks. First of all, I see a lot of repetition, for instance, “When we see others expressing themselves with self acceptance, we feel a sense of acceptance towards what they are doing too.” You obviously repeated the word self-acceptance too much throughout your article. You could have used a thesaurus to help you look for synonyms and therefore avoid redundancy.
My second comment falls on the form of the essay. I notice no spaces between paragraphs, no indentation, and most of all, a lack of proper punctuation. For example, (“this is beautiful”. )
Here, the period should precede the quotation mark and not vice versa . Furthermore, this short piece of writing looks like a whole block of sentences, and this, does not appeal to the reader. Another sentence to consider is the following:
“You’ve got to have complete self expression in order to fully communicate what it is you want to communicate to another.”
You need to omit, (“it is”). Because it adds more confusion than clarity to the meaning.
To sum up, I say that you succeeded in conveying your message. But, you need to carry out more research on the elements of style. Then your ideas will be more appealing and delightful to the senses.
We will be overtaken by the power and magic of thought intertwined with the beauty and neatness of style.
It's plagiarized! I would lock this if I could, but I can't yet. Still, reviewers be aware. There are a bunch of wonderful, original works for you to review.
First off, welcome to YWS!
Well, I actually wrote a whole review for this but then I was a little unsure about if this was an original work or not. So, I googled it and it appears that parts of it might be plagerized? If you just took parts of it, and the rest is original please cite your sources! Or maybe you've posted this piece on other places? Because I'd love to review it if any of it is actually original, but I wont if I'm not sure.
~ally-wa