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This is a very interesting change. For one thing no Silvia, its simply him and his stupid ramblings, yes that is what I have named them. In fact as I ...

I don't know who is more pathetic, Ryan or Silvia. Ryan is a bit too hormonal to the point that his sense of logic is messed up. I mean the ...

For the first half I was not completely into it. This was because I kept waiting for the atmosphere I felt in chapter 6 and 7 to set in. But ...

Wow, this is so amazing. As I predicted some huge plot is going on and it seems a hell of a lot of people are not on Dixon's side. Contrary ...

Grammar wise and writing wise it was almost perfect. Don't ask why it wasn't perfect, I rarely say something is perfect. The descriptions do the scenes and characters justice. As ...

This was a very touching chapter that made me cringe because as he said no one else can understand it sometimes and I certainly couldn't. For one thing the meaning ...

I came on here to review because of secret Santa but I have been genuinely intrigued by your novel. This is the first chapter I have read, I will read ...

The first review was spot on. This is not long enough. I read through it in like 2 seconds and I am left wanting more but not in the sense ...

"I would sue!" Ha ha ha, lol. Single handedly the best line in the chapter. So ridiculously hilarious to read. I couldn't help myself sorry. :( Anyway now onto the ...

Now you have even more about the world. Slowly you have built up the society of wizards and evil elves as well as the anomalous man who is working with ...

When You write a message to us the readers about your novel put in in brackets. This way we don't confuse it with the story. For example the very last ...

This has got interesting a lot more than last time. For one thing you have revealed a very sinister plot. You have gone and made elves evil which is daring ...

I am curious about why it is called Ink and why the chapter is called lana. However aside from that it was amazing. I am utterly surprised by how dark ...

The still need to be two major changes. The time skip is still quite confusing. The start is good where you make it clear that there is a skip but ...

At the start I was utterly annoyed and was going to complain because it seemed like the ending of the previous chapter didn't happen, but I am glad I was ...