myjaspercat

Yes, it's all a flashback, basically leading up to the point where Jasper meets the two brothers from chapter and their family. Thank's for the dialogue tips.

Thank you for the review, to cover the two things you mentioned; I use the writing app called Poe and the reason why this chapter is pure italics is because ...

Thank you so much for the review, I appreciate it. About the resentment thing, I think I'm understanding why people are getting a little 'confused,' the reason why the resentment ...

Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.

I'm so glad to be of help. When I said confusing, I meant that the ideas felt a little jumbled around. I understood what the text meant -for the most ...

Of course, I'm just glad to be able to help

Thank you for your review. So first off I'm sorry it's kind of confusing, I normally don't write in this style/format so it was kind of an experimental piece for ...

It's ok for the late reply, I'm just glad to know I am of help --if you respond or not. I will also totally get to your next part within ...

Ok, well first of all I never meant to offend you in anyway. And I'm not saying your story didn't have any good parts, I did find the idea interesting ...

Thank you for your review. About the comments regarding them being alone, the whole "devil's advocate thing" and the lady in the back of the van: this story is supposed ...

I would love to see your other format, and don't worry, the one you have now isn't bad by any stretch, it just needs a little work, that's all.

Of course, I'm glad to help someone on their journey to poetry. And yes, Supernatural is like life. I'm glad to find someone else who also thinks that.

Thank you so much for your reply, I found it both helpful and amusing to read.

of course

I totally get what you mean. I do the same thing myself sometimes too.