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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: With Every Step

    thank you, i'm glad that you like this. I didn't write this for stanzas but if it really needs some then I can try to work it out.

    Jun 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: With Every Step

    thank you for your feedback, so with the words thing, i kind of meant for that to be just 'words' not really specifying but if others as well see an ...

    Jun 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Lyrical Re: Cassandra

    thank you

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Lyrical Re: His Game

    thank you and glad you see the connection. I feel like I might add something before the previous

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Is This Truly Love?

    Thank you. I'm glad you liked it

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Is This Truly Love?

    thank you i'm glad you liked the poem. I'm srry this took long to reply but i was away and i just got in. So again thank you.

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: An expected, Unexpected suprise

    Thank you so much

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Is This Truly Love?

    Thank you, I'm glad you liked how I described 'him'. To me the most beautiful men aren't fully built and all that, I think they're more refined and beautiful but ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: An expected, Unexpected suprise

    Thank you, i'm glad you liked it. In fact I thought pitter-patter was going to be to childlike so I was actually afraid to you it. Again thank you.

    May 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: An expected, Unexpected suprise

    Thank you, I try to title my poems to make them tie into the poem itself and I prefer to use a quote that ties with the poem as well. ...

    May 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: An expected, Unexpected suprise

    Thank you, I try to title my poems to make them tie into the poem itself and I prefer to use a quote that ties with the poem as well. ...

    May 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: An expected, Unexpected suprise

    Thank you

    May 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Is This Truly Love?

    Thank you I'm glad you like it.

    May 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Is This Truly Love?

    Thank you. I'm glad you liked my poem.

    May 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Is it better to have her but not be with her?

    Well ok, but I think you should become serious about writing, especially if you post it to get reviews. I think you could write some nice stuff.

    May 30, 2015


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